Om Sri Hari Damian,
Bravo! This is a very well written article. I loved the way you presented it.
The only modification Advaitic scholar may suggest:
Body-mind-sense manifests in consciousness, not the other way around.
Consciousness is not in the body, but the body and the world around us are in our consciouness. When you meditate on this thought, you will see the truth. It is pretty profound.
Sending my love, peace, and respect. 🙏💗